Beta Reader Rating of “The Intruders”

I try to find beta readers for all of my books months before they are due to be released. To get a public’s opinion on them before they are released. Some time I get one and some times I don’t. But if and as I get them I will share them with you all.

One of the beta readers ofย  The Intruders just sent in their review.

My publisher explained that they asked that all reviews, opinions be sent to them on PDF so that I no one can accuse me of alternating the review in my favor. I have no problem with that. ๐Ÿ™‚

Most likely this book won’t be out until next year.


.I was asked to read and rate this book as beta reader




Intruders- Ebook Cover

About unholypursuit

A. White, an award winning former librarian, who is also a long time member of Romantic Time and Publisher's Weekly. A. White has been writing for over fifteen years. She took classes in creative writing in college, specializing in ancient myths and legends. and later at a local community center while living in Chicago. In college she won the national contest to verbally list every country in the world, it's capital and ingenious language. Her works are mainly horror, fantasy, extreme, and sci-fi as well as, as some may says, "the truly strange predicament and puzzling." Books that I've written are "Clash with the Immortals, and eleven others which are part of the "Unholy Pursuit saga,". She has been working on the Chronicles since 2007. She wished to complete them all before introducing them to public so the readers wouldn't have to for the continuation to be written. The ideas of the book come from classic literature such as whose work greatly influence the world world such as Homer, Sophocles, Herodotus, Euripides, Socrates, Hippocrates, Aristophanes, Plato, Aristotle and many more. The "Book of Enoch" influenced the usage of Azazael as a main character and love interest. I created the primary main character from the Chronicle of Saints. I wanted to show them as real flesh and blood with thoughts, desires and yearning as any human. Not as they are so often depicted. So I created one of my own to show her as a real human that everyone can relate to.
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5 Responses to Beta Reader Rating of “The Intruders”

  1. I would like to take this time out to dearly thanks Ms. Alberaneshia Henriksen for her review and opinion of The Intruder.

    On Tue, Aug 1, 2017 at 1:03 AM, The Novel: UnHoly Pursuit: Devil on my Tra


  2. Ann Harden says:

    I wish the person had given us more juicy details.

    On Tue, Aug 1, 2017 at 1:03 AM, The Novel: UnHoly Pursuit: Devil on my Tra


  3. Ann Harden says:

    I’m offering myself as Beta Reader for this one.

    Liked by 1 person

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