Whether your fantasy world is earthy, sci-fi or otherworldly world building is very important in any Fantasy Novel to give full details of the characters surroundings. Town, village or even other worlds. It gives the reader a clear idea of your character’s, environment and the world they lives in and how they interact with others. It doesn’t always have to be a wholly invented world. It can be your own addition to the real world. Places that do not exist or fictional usage of place that does exist. The material use in building a world tells a lot about the characters. It’s tell a lot about their society. What kind of people are they. Whether they’re wealthy, poor, combative, placid, it all can depicted in the world building. When one isn’t good at drawing you have to depend upon others. I was sent this today for an inspection to see if it was going along the image I had in mind. The artists said they aren’t finish yet. But I think she did a marvelous job. Even down to the great central sandstone castle and the surrounding castles of nobility and neighborhood of the next class. Norshires doesn’t look exactly the same in this era as it does in Queen Erin, Tearleach and etc from “King Eocaidh the Horse Warrior.” This is Norshires in the days of giant deer and bears. Settled shortly after the last Ice Age. The artist captured the true essence of the place. I didn’t want it completely like a medieval styled castle because Norshires long predates the Middle Ages by thousands of eons. It was more of a city nation or city state like Athens and Sparta.
I can see farms, lakes, or loch if you prefer. There are trees, fields, ponds, the ocean to the right and even the legendary tree with the golden apples right outside the door.

The two illustrations are showing how the place grew with the passage of time.
It is looking very good indeed!!! 🙂
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Thanks. 🙂
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You are welcome! I am looking forward to seeing the finished item! 🙂
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Thanks. I, too look forward to the day she say she’s done.
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I love the way she showed the daily and farm life living beside the royal and military life You can tell there are noble estates within Norshires. I’m assuming Norshires is a city-state like Athens.
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Thanks for your observation. No, Norshires isn’t a city-state like Athens. It’s not a part of any nation because it’s not wholly in this world.
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I’ve recently finished writing my first novel. I still need to finish the editing before the editing, but otherwise I’m happy with my 187K word creation. I invested quite a bit of time into creating a small town in Nebraska. I hadn’t realized how much work it would take in order to be accurate. Everything from the plants, trees, weather, and how many police officers work in a town given its population. I enjoyed the work immensely. Something about creating my own world and people does it for me. I went all out, especially on my characters. Right down to the details of their advanced educations and what songs were playing on the radio during their senior year in high school. Yes, there’s nothing like writing a novel. 😊
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No, there’s nothing quite like bringing people and places together and bringing them to life. Yes, you have to work out the smallest details to make a town believable and not seems one-dimensional. Yes, you have to decide the size of the population, how many officials there are and even down to how much food there’s available. One must be careful in being consist with the time periods also. Do not write in inventions that were yet to come in the era of the novel. This include words too.
Yes, one can tell when an author have gone all out to bring their town to life. I wish you much success.
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Thank You! I Love Words 😊
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I know the feeling. 🙂 One who love words can live many different adventures. 🙂
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Absolutely! Words are powerful!
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Yes, they are powerful if one knows how to use them.
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Yes, you’re absolutely correct. 😊
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Can you tell us what your story is about or when will it be published?
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To start, it’s Fantasy Fiction. I’m undecided on whether or not I’m going to publish it on Amazon myself or continue to wait and have it professionally edited first. I may self-publish the first half. 80-100 K words is still a decent sized ebook.
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Fantasy Fictions are usually fun to read and fun to write.
If you plan to wait for a traditional publishing house do not publish any of it prior to submitting it the publishing company. The wait may be longer than you wish to wait. By no means am I trying to discourage you. I’m just trying to prepare you for what maybe a long string of rejections before finding an agent to submit your work to the traditional publishers. Most will not accept work from an unagented writer.
Expect to pay at least $1,200 for an independent editor. Many won’t take it if it’s already published. That applies to primarily to work that’s already popular with a large fan base. Yes, that’s a decent sized book. The average Kindle book size is about 300 pages, or 75,000 words of text, and the average Kindle e-book file size is 2.6 MB.
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Thank You for the information. I appreciate it!!! 😊
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You’re welcome. Best wishes in your writings. 🙂
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Thank You So Much! 😊
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You are welcome.
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Isn’t that an awful lot for less than 2,000 words?
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No, not really, if you go for certain ones. You can get it done much cheaper with someone willing to give you a break.
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Have you published it yet?
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Nothing so far.
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Why not? I’m not saying you can’t get a traditional publisher to accept your novel but from I hear it’s difficult and a long wait and even longer line of rejections. Do you have an agent yet? Make you will get lucky and get beyond all that swink and lockstep. I hope you do. I belongs to WattPad, a Writing site that writes for readers to read for free and have heard the authors talk about these things.
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That’s a good idea. I’ve heard of the site.
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An agent is a good idea. I’m just finishing my own editing but I could definitely present something polished. I looked at Wattpad briefly a couple of years ago. It’s time I take another look.
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I know this is between you and Louvre, but I do not advise to publish stories there you intend to introduce to a publishers. They can be peculiar, they all like to be the first to look at a work.
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? You lost me
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Lost you in what part?
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Oops, I got it. 😊
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Yes, I’ve heard that to be so. I have some decisions to make for sure.
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Yes, some will out right asked you have you sent the manuscript to anyone else. 😦
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I wish you well in whatever road you take. 🙂
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I appreciate all of the information and most of all Your Time! Thank You! 😊🙏😊
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You’re most welcome. All authors at some point in time of their writing journey will need information from others. Well wishes. 🙂
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I loved King Eochaidh, never heard of him before reading your book. The book gave a good description of Norshires.
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Thank you for reading.
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You best to hold on to this artist and get her to do all your maps. Most novel’s maps are nothing more than Medievalist gray drawings with names and squiggles. Never seen a novel’s map like this. I’m impressed.
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I’m glad you like it.
Oh yes, I pester her every chance I get. 🙂
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Why not? I’m not saying you can’t get a traditional publisher to accept your novel but from I hears it’s a long wait and even long line of rejections. Do you have an agent yet? Good luck. Look forward to reading your novel.
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Love the details.
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Thanks. 🙂
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